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Itasuku Grave Robber
Posts : 1825 Points : 1821 Join date : 2009-02-28
Character sheet Strength : (108/1000) Intelligence: (90/1000) HP: (108/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Fri Aug 14, 2009 1:26 am | |
| Social Darwinism of Modern Times A Rant Poem -Itasuku Nioto
Well then. Let's begin
There are the jocks
Kings and Queens of the school Popular for what reason? Who the hell knows... But they're sweaty, disgusting, and most of the time... Mentally challenged ways Always amuses me whenever they walk by and call me a dike or gay or whatever word seems to please them that day. And as mad as it makes me. I laugh and laugh because they only feel powerful in numbers And when you corner them one day in the hall And you grab them by their shirts They always seem to tremble.
They are the lions.
Then there are the Preps
Oh ho ho Look at me Bouncin' around the whole damn school With a bleached smile and a pressed skirt Gotta go catch my advanced math class before the bell rings. Think I'm the best Because I'm so involved. It's too bad that By the time they turn 19 They just cracked under the stress of it all. And eventually show up with a gun And just go Fucking Nuts...
These are the bees.
Woo for Ultra-nerds.
What would we do without them? There's at least one in every school. Always caught up with the lamest shows on the planet. Flashing their 14 dollar braces they bought at the rent a dentist Strutting their newly made polyester fashions. And as much as we laugh. They're people too. Couldn't we just get along? I mean in thirty years or so, they're gonna be ruling the planet. Better make friends before it's too late.
They are the Unborn fetus's of the Shark
How could we forget the Special Ed?
Oh my god Get a brain Get a life Do something before you die. They try and make fun of you to make up for their insufficiency Too bad they don't know the moronic words coming out of their mouths. Half of them don't even know what they mean. The other half. Can't pronounce them.
They are the slowest of the slow The sloths.
C'mon, lets hear it We've got stinger spirit!
Fuck off Cheerleader. Your happy, peppy attitude doesn't make our football team suck any less than it already does. And you know why? YOU COME UP WITH THE WORST RHYMES IN THE WORLD AND JUST PRETEND IT'S OKAY TO BE SPEWING THAT HORRIBLE FILTH OVER THE CROWD! And when your in the hall?! OH NO! You act like your on top of the food chain news flash? YOUR NOT!
They are the Butterflies.
What about skater boi over there? His possy has taken on the image of a semi baked dozen of transvestites looking for a good time. Just because you can go 4 miles per hour on a board in which you can outrun doesn't mean your cool. YOUR NOT ALL THAT AND A BAG OF CHIPS HOME SLICE ugh. just speaking your language makes me wanna gag.
They are the Salamanders Slimy and cold no matter how you look at it.
OH MY GOD RUN! IT'S THE CRAZY'S!
The crazy's just wanna have fun. They enjoy life at it's fullest and don't miss an opportunity to crack a joke. They herd too. Herd with at least 3 other people to complete their crazy cycle because none of them are crazy enough to be completely crazy but their combined effort manages to bring down the whole school. And they're the one's who seem to succeed in life too....
They are sheep.
What about make up mongers? Make up mongers never cease to impress. Let's extrapolate. Make up mongers range from gothic eyeliner and black lipstic to Blue eye shadow and rainbow lashes. They always put on make up whenever they can. For various reasons too. Know how much you could have saved for college assholes? Who cares now. All that matters is that you look good (Gag)
They are Chameleons
There are plenty of other group in our Social Rankings Like
Emo Goth Procrastinators the Silent Type Druggie Druggies friends who are against drugs but still do them anyways Pre Mature Frat boy
But...
the most important group?
Last, but not least. There are the roamers. Roamers are the favored of all the classes in Social Darwinism. They have achieved a greater standing within the food chain. Why? Because they are within all of the fore mentioned groups in some strange connection Everyone knows the roamers Everyone is nice to the roamers The roamers are nice to everyone. And eventually The roamers control all the functions of organized education. (high school ....dumb ass)
The roamers. People like me... We are above all. We are. human. | |
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Suzumi Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 4109 Points : 3418 Join date : 2009-02-08 Age : 30 Location : places...
Character sheet Strength : (161/1000) Intelligence: (167/1000) HP: (158/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:47 pm | |
| Results for Poem Contest
5-8 People Participate: 1st Place: 13 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 11 Stamina Points 3rd Place: 9 Stamina Points First Place: Itasuku [Reward: 13 Stamina Points] Second Place: Sienna Tsumari [Reward: 11 Stamina Points] Third Place: Diva Kiss [Reward: 9 Stamina Points]
Please PM or post here, what bars you would like the points to be received in ^_^
Congratulations to all that have won and participated. All participants will receive 2 points in each bar for participation. Thank you!
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Sae Seruna Beginner
Posts : 151 Points : 152 Join date : 2009-08-20
Character sheet Strength : (10/1000) Intelligence: (10/1000) HP: (10/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:51 pm | |
| Hooray!!! Diva got placed!! XD | |
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Diva Kiss Sophomore
Posts : 1135 Points : 1161 Join date : 2009-08-04 Location : East Wing, Dorm #3
Character sheet Strength : (22/1000) Intelligence: (22/1000) HP: (24/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Fri Aug 21, 2009 3:41 pm | |
| Yay! 3rd place! XDDD
Can I have 3 in each bar, please? | |
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Kansen-Sama Beginner
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 149 Points : 149 Join date : 2009-07-05 Age : 31 Location : ...Narnia brb...
Character sheet Strength : (21/1000) Intelligence: (20/1000) HP: (22/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:45 pm | |
| Excuse me! When will the next contest start!? | |
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Suzumi Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 4109 Points : 3418 Join date : 2009-02-08 Age : 30 Location : places...
Character sheet Strength : (161/1000) Intelligence: (167/1000) HP: (158/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:03 pm | |
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Sakura Itachi College Sophomore
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 5712 Points : 5795 Join date : 2009-06-25 Age : 31 Location : Hidden under a shell.
Character sheet Strength : (41/1000) Intelligence: (41/1000) HP: (42/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:04 pm | |
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Suzumi Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 4109 Points : 3418 Join date : 2009-02-08 Age : 30 Location : places...
Character sheet Strength : (161/1000) Intelligence: (167/1000) HP: (158/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Tue Sep 22, 2009 6:41 pm | |
| POETRY CONTEST
Create a Poem that is original and made by you. Post it here, any kind of poem will due. The poem contest will end [October 24, 2009]. It can not be the same poem you entered in the other contest. You may only post ONE poem PER contest. More updates and rules will be added in the meantime.
Contest Ends: October 24, 2009
Reward(s): 2-4 People Participate: 1st Place: 10 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 7 Stamina Points 3rd Place: 4 Stamina Points
5-8 People Participate: 1st Place: 13 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 11 Stamina Points 3rd Place: 9 Stamina Points
9-12 People Participate: 1st Place: 15 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 13 Stamina Points 3rd Place: 11 Stamina Points
13-16 People Participate: 1st Place: 17 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 15 Stamina Points 3rd Place: 13 Stamina Points 4th Place: 11 Stamina Points 5th Place: 9 Stamina Points
Rules: 1. Be original. Don't copy off of others, and it has to be originally from you. 2. Enter the poem by the due date. 3. ONE poem entered PER contest 4. Don't Spam. Questions may be posted. Comments should be PMed.
Main Judge: Suzumi
All questions please send to Suzumi. | |
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Vladimir Alucard Sophomore
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 1316 Points : 1349 Join date : 2009-09-15 Age : 30 Location : In your ventalation system.
Character sheet Strength : (66/1000) Intelligence: (66/1000) HP: (67/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Wed Sep 23, 2009 3:48 pm | |
| NEVERMIND! Guess I do... kinda short in comparison to the others but I worked to make it as humorous as possible
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~A Christmas Tale~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
'Twas the night before Christmas, and all through the house Not a creature was stirring, not even a mouse. Except for my son Billy's pet mouse named Chris. I'm not really sure where I'm going with this. Anyway, my wife in her kerchief and I in my cap, Were asleep after a long day of Christmassy crap. When then, from the chimney, there arose quite a clamour, "There's someone in the house" my frightened wife stammered. I reached for the bedside, grabbed my handgun and said, "This trespasser's getting an ass full of lead" | |
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Drina Grave Robber
Posts : 5590 Points : 4893 Join date : 2009-02-23 Location : doing what i want to
Character sheet Strength : (103/1000) Intelligence: (102/1000) HP: (106/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Wed Sep 23, 2009 4:35 pm | |
| A Werewolf's Time (Shed Your Skin) Shed your skin my friend, and tear through the fields Shed your skin my friend, and stalk in the night Shed your skin my friend, it won't hurt if you just give in Shed your skin my friend, and listen to your bones Shed your skin my friend, and just give in Shed your skin my friend, you know you can't resist Shed your skin my friend, love it or hate it Shed your skin my friend, find it a curse or a gift It is your wish
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Maya Student Officer
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 7451 Points : 7443 Join date : 2009-04-13 Age : 32 Location : in a black coffin 6 feet under
Character sheet Strength : (73/1000) Intelligence: (70/1000) HP: (77/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Sat Sep 26, 2009 4:08 pm | |
| Darkness darkness engulfs me taking over i dont want it too it drives me away from people the people i love it tears away my soul piece by piece it kills me inside it drives me to do bad stuff unmetionable stuff darkness is in everyones heart you cant avoid it its coming for you | |
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Kansen-Sama Beginner
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 149 Points : 149 Join date : 2009-07-05 Age : 31 Location : ...Narnia brb...
Character sheet Strength : (21/1000) Intelligence: (20/1000) HP: (22/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:02 am | |
| Forgiveness People so rude They won't let me speak! I think it's their fault That I am so weak I have died on November 17 The memories of my life still haunting me The pain still lingers From neglect all I wanted was some respect Despite the way that I am feeling forgiveness is the first step to healing | |
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artixvoncreg Freshmen
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 924 Points : 926 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 29
Character sheet Strength : (39/1000) Intelligence: (39/1000) HP: (39/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Thu Oct 01, 2009 4:01 pm | |
| more than i can bare
my heart just isnt in the song anymore. my eyes are stinging. my tears are falling. but most of all i feel my heart breaking.
the pain is more than i can bare. the sorrows too big for me to wear. through my tears i can hardly see. but...its only human so theres nothing wrong with me.
you may laugh and you may sneer but when it happens to you there'll be nobody there. a sister,a father, a mother or a brother. either way its all the same. theres nobody but fate to blame.
my heart just isnt in the song anymore. my eyes are stinging. my tears keep falling. and i still feel my heart breaking.
theres nothing i can do its just a part of life. ill have to sit here and deal with the strife. theres no easy way around you just have to stand your ground. ill say it with a sigh....its ok to cry.
over time my heart will mend. i know they went to a better place. so ill try and keep a braver face.
my hearts just not in the song anymore. my eyes are fine. and my tears will stop with time. i promised my self i wouldnt break apart. you'll always have a special place in my heart. | |
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Minka Junior
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 2648 Points : 2650 Join date : 2009-05-27 Age : 27 Location : Blood filled Lake
Character sheet Strength : (81/1000) Intelligence: (73/1000) HP: (81/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:30 pm | |
| Glass Wall
Falling threw, the wall of glass. The one I built to keep everything out. Broken into pieces, wall around. People walk by, not seeing me. The wall gone, my spirit flying away. Picking the pieces up; do I only hurt myself more. Do now I don't quit. I pick them up, ignoring the pain. Til once more the glass wall is built. Welcome to my life. | |
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Kyoshiro Beginner
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 201 Points : 207 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 29 Location : Beside you..
Character sheet Strength : (21/1000) Intelligence: (20/1000) HP: (20/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Fri Oct 02, 2009 4:43 am | |
| Roses are red,Violets are blue When your mother says you're beautiful, They're lying to you
Roses are red,Violets are blue Every time I flash the toilet, I remember you.. :D
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Nasin Junior
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 2007 Points : 2018 Join date : 2009-09-15 Age : 29 Location : Friggin tip of the world
Character sheet Strength : (31/1000) Intelligence: (32/1000) HP: (30/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Fri Oct 02, 2009 5:36 am | |
| Ehm
ohh will smith, that was good Shooting those robots down in this flood Of metal and evil, they want power It's like a goddamn metal flower Growing everyday, letting out that metal scent Yet at day they act like they are the only gent. o_0 SEE A WILL SMITH POEM FOR YA!! | |
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Sakura Itachi College Sophomore
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 5712 Points : 5795 Join date : 2009-06-25 Age : 31 Location : Hidden under a shell.
Character sheet Strength : (41/1000) Intelligence: (41/1000) HP: (42/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Sat Oct 03, 2009 10:03 am | |
| **NOTE: PLEASE DO NOT SPAM ON THIS TOPIC, THIS IS A POEM CONTEST NOT A PLACE TO TALK TO PEOPLE, ADMINS NEED TO SEE THE POEMS IN ORDER TO JUDGE THEM.... thanks bunches.... love, Saku.**
-Hell- By: Sakura Itachi
Lifeless souls screaming from the top of their lungs Burning in the pits of hell Grasping for something to hold Hoping for eternity to unfold Their bodies burning Within the flames of the firey hell An Angry God laughing With exquisite agony Listening to their screams Hungring for the God in Heaven To take their souls Not wanting to burn eternaly Voices fade as their bodies decay To bad there is no delay Every scream, every cry As it fades and dies The Angry God himself rejoices for their dismay.
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Suzumi Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 4109 Points : 3418 Join date : 2009-02-08 Age : 30 Location : places...
Character sheet Strength : (161/1000) Intelligence: (167/1000) HP: (158/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Tue Oct 27, 2009 5:53 pm | |
| GAH. Please NO SPAM! TT_TT It takes me SO much longer to judge everything because I have to go through the spam in order to find/read the poems! | |
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Suzumi Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 4109 Points : 3418 Join date : 2009-02-08 Age : 30 Location : places...
Character sheet Strength : (161/1000) Intelligence: (167/1000) HP: (158/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:17 pm | |
| Poem Contest Results October 24, 2009
1st Place: artixvoncreg {15 Stamina Points} 2nd Place: Kansen-sama {13 Stamina Points} 3rd Place: Vladimur Alucard {11 Stamina Points}
All get 1 point for participation!
Thank you for joining!
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Suzumi Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 4109 Points : 3418 Join date : 2009-02-08 Age : 30 Location : places...
Character sheet Strength : (161/1000) Intelligence: (167/1000) HP: (158/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:50 pm | |
| Just PM me, Artix. And I said no spam, Eiko. It'll start shortly, Maya. | |
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Lady Annabella Freshmen
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 288 Points : 304 Join date : 2009-11-04 Age : 28 Location : No where.
Character sheet Strength : (30/1000) Intelligence: (30/1000) HP: (30/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Wed Nov 04, 2009 7:52 pm | |
| Hurt My heart is burnning, My eye's are turning. The lie's are killing, The time is filling. And yet you say your hurting? | |
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Suzumi Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 4109 Points : 3418 Join date : 2009-02-08 Age : 30 Location : places...
Character sheet Strength : (161/1000) Intelligence: (167/1000) HP: (158/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Thu Nov 12, 2009 6:14 pm | |
| Poem Contest:
Reward(s): 2-4 People Participate: 1st Place: 10 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 7 Stamina Points
5-8 People Participate: 1st Place: 13 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 11 Stamina Points 3rd Place: 9 Stamina Points
9-12 People Participate: 1st Place: 15 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 13 Stamina Points 3rd Place: 11 Stamina Points
13+ People Participate: 1st Place: 17 Stamina Points 2nd Place: 15 Stamina Points 3rd Place: 13 Stamina Points 4th Place: 11 Stamina Points 5th Place: 9 Stamina Points
Rules:
1. Be original. Don't copy off of others, and it has to be originally from you.
2. Enter the poem by the due date.
3. ONE poem entered PER contest
4. Don't Spam. Questions may be posted. Comments should be PMed.
Main Judge: Suzumi
Due Date: December 20th
All questions please send to Suzumi. | |
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Minka Junior
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 2648 Points : 2650 Join date : 2009-05-27 Age : 27 Location : Blood filled Lake
Character sheet Strength : (81/1000) Intelligence: (73/1000) HP: (81/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:55 pm | |
| Listen close, listen carefully. Hear me once, hear me twice. Speak softy, speak lowly. Walk silently, walk with grace. The night is here, the sky is black. Ever so lightly, ever so soft. White as a cloud, white so pure. Snow is here, snow is everywhere. Bells ring, bells ring softy. The fire so warm, the fire so calming. Could you hear them laugh? Could you hear them talk? Soft giggles, soft laughs. Will this night, ever, ever, end? | |
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Kamille Emiri Sophomore
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 1272 Points : 588 Join date : 2009-02-09 Age : 33 Location : Innciting A Yuri Riot at Borde
Character sheet Strength : (90/1000) Intelligence: (89/1000) HP: (88/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:22 pm | |
| We held hands on the last night on earth Our mouths filled with dust. We kissed under the trees And in the fields Screaming like dogs, Bleeding dark into leaves. It was empty on the edge of town But we knew everyone floated along the bottom of the river. So we walk through the waste where the road curved into the sea. And the shattered seasons lay and the bitter smell of burning was on you like a disease In our cancer of passion you said "Death is a midnight runner."
the sky came crashing down like the news of an intimate suicide we picked up the shards and formed them into shapes of stars that wore like an antique wedding dress The echoes of the past broke the hearts of the unborn as the ferris wheel silently slowed to a stop. the few insects skittered away in hopes of a better pastime i kissed you at the apex of the maelstrom and asked if you would accompany me in a quick fall but you made me realize that my ticket wasn't good for two... i rode alone
You said the cinders are falling like snow. there is poetry in despair And we sang with unrivaled beauty. bitter elegies of savagery and eloquence. Of blue and grey. Strange, we ran down desperate streets and carved our names in the flesh of the city. The sun was stagnated somewhere beyond the rim of the horizon and the darkness is a mystery of curves and lines. Still, we lay under the emptiness and drifted slowly outward, and somewhere in the wilderness we found salvation scratched into the earth like a message. | |
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Makoto Kiyomizu Beginner
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 166 Points : 169 Join date : 2009-12-03 Age : 34 Location : Somewhere on Earth
Character sheet Strength : (25/1000) Intelligence: (25/1000) HP: (25/1000)
| Subject: Re: Poem Contest Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:32 am | |
| Title: This shameful ode to you
by lee12akma (aka Makoto Kiyomizu)
The words you forced me to speak, are phrases for your own delight. Though my comments may not seem so meek, it is true that your beauty stole my sight. It is true that your voice echoes in my ears, like a heavenly musical tune, that makes even the blind shed tears, just like Beethoven’s sonata under the moon. As I take each and every step on this snowy road, I can only think of your heart so cold, So I now sing this warm yet, shameful ode, just to have “I love you” told.
Though this confession may not be so catchy, everything about you-....told my heart: veni, vidi, vici.
P.S. veni, vidi, vici = "I came, I saw, I conquered" in Latin by Julius Caesar. | |
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