Poem Contest

Create a Poem that is original and made by you. Post it here, any kind of poem will due. The poem contest will end [April 19th]. It can not be the same poem you entered in the other contest. You may only post ONE poem PER contest. More updates and rules will be added in the meantime.

Contest Ends: April 19th

Reward(s):
First Place: 7 Experience Points
Second Place: 5 Experience Points
Third Place: 3 Experience Points

Rules:
1. Be original. Don't copy off of others, and it has to be originally from you.
2. Enter the poem by the due date.
3. ONE poem entered PER contest
4. Don't Spam. Questions may be posted. Comments should be PMed.

gone before you're time
how can this be right?
left before you could come
love you even though i never met you
you took my place
fallen before i could catch you
leaving me with out a face
how can i forgive
what they've taken away
taken away from me
gone before you're time
how can this be right?
left before you could come
love you more then anything
even though I've never seen you
but you never could come
never given you're chance
i wish it was me and not you
you deserved to see
unlike me
life for a life
that's the way i see it
gone before you're time
how can this be right?
left before you could come
they took you away
that could have been me
that should have been me
not you
I'm sorry
how can you forgive me
gone before you're time
how can this be right?
left before you could come
now you'll never know how much i loved you

(would this be a song or a poem? XD)

(Idk XDDD but its really good ^_^)

(aw thanks i made it for my nephew cuz my sister in-law had a miscarriage so i never got to see him)

http://www.quizilla.com/poems/5768188/lost

(my computer wouldn't let me copy it or maybe it was something i did when i typed it so there's a link to it on my quizilla account)

Tick tock tick tock! boom boom boom. The clock ticks faster my heart bets harder.whin is this madnes going to end sherly the clock will kill me if my heart dose not.This is the story of how the old man died.Ther once was a man who sat by the river at dark waching for his death to come now i am his care taker and dont get me wrong he was a mad man he has no life so he sayshe was ment to die.So one day i had a plan to kill the old man.The next day i put my plan to work.By the river did i tie the rope to the tree then to the old mans throut SNAP now the old manswings back and foruth over the river.Death has come as he spoke.



WHOS NEXT!!

One soul who was never thought of
He was never given a chance, no choice
His family shunned him, for nothing but himself
These actions confused him

But there was one, one who thought of him, and only him
He considered of him as his own son, and took him in
He fed and sheltered, and loved him
But the child never knew physical pain

Pain was a mystery in his mind
He was blind to love, as children are
But he never had someone love him
The pain he had, was a wound of the heart

The wound grew everyday
The man he loved would soon betray
But the boy would go on
By murdering everyone in his way

And as he lived, another changed his mind
He fought, and the fight raged on
But he soon learned, love could heal almost anything
Even a wound of the heart


(It's a Gaara tribute, if you can't tell. I wrote it trying to get into a writing school.)

I hate to tell you this
But I love someone else
Don't be sad
Don't be mad
Please don't gry
Cause I will cry too
Just know this
I will still love you
I hate to tell you this
But I love someone new
Don't hate me
Don't hate you
Please say we can still be friends
Cause I want to stay close
Just know this
You will always be in my heart

POEM RESULTS:

1st Place is...SIRENA! Prize: 7 experience points!

2nd Place is...Chi! Prize: 5 experience points

3rd Place...Luna! Prize: 3 experience points

Please tell me what bars u want the points to go in. Thank you!

Thank you to all of you who participated. You all get 1 point in each bar for participation! I loved reading your poems and look forward to more in the next contest (coming soon)

yay! 1 in each bar! *does little dance*

Can we PLEASE have another poem contet?? PWEASE.

i'm with nami-chan i love poems wighting them and reading them

Yay! Doesn that mean we can have another poem contest????!
:kawaii:

you should PM suzu-chan and ask her ^_^

Good point! I'll do that! ^ ^

awesome

Hey Luna! She said after the war we'd have another one. Is the war over?

yeah tis over

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Create a Poem that is original and made by you. Post it here, any kind of poem will due. The poem contest will end [June 22]. It can not be the same poem you entered in the other contest. You may only post ONE poem PER contest. More updates and rules will be added in the meantime.

Contest Ends: June 22nd

Reward(s):
First Place: 17 Experience Points
Second Place: 15 Experience Points
Third Place: 13 Experience Points
Fourth Place: 11 Experience Points
Fifth Place: 9 Experience Points

Rules:
1. Be original. Don't copy off of others, and it has to be originally from you.
2. Enter the poem by the due date.
3. ONE poem entered PER contest
4. Don't Spam. Questions may be posted. Comments should be PMed.

Death is a word that screams through my head,
Never resting untill all is said,
Nothing can stop the endless fight,
It goes on all through the night
the blood poors out of sight
I see the end it's not too bright
but I'll keep it pooring till it feels right
as a single tear soars
my body aches and roars
it seems like a pretty red
but all it does is send me to a death bed
it's all just a bit too much
so I stop and look
everyones shook and my head feels light again
a simple smile won't make you walk that mile
over and over again your words seem to spread
my mind is loose and dead
I've fallen to my death bed


For my best friend, M .

by Sienna Tsumari

YAY!!!!!! POEM CONTEST!!! OOH OOH OOH!!!!!!!! I HAVE ONE I HAVE ONE!!!!!! Sowi if it's not that good...he he. ^ ^
~~~~~~~~No more gray~~~~~~~~
You open your eyes yet there's no light.
It's hard to believe the world was once bright.
Everyone's gone...and your alone.
There's no one to call...yet you still keep your phone.

You look out the window to see nothing but gray...
You kneel to the ground and start to pray...
"Oh God please help me get through this day..."

You sit on your bed and stare at the wall...
you listen closely but hear nothing at all...
The noises that you used to hear...
have somehow come to disappear...

You call out the names of the ppl you know...
You ask them to come...and yet they do not show...
Your life has fallen in to a deep dark pit...
your starting to feel like a piece of $h!t...

The tears a flowing from your eyes...
you feel like dying...that's no suprise...
your friends are gone...your family too...
they went away and forgot about you...

Your life is gone and your heart is braking...
You still can't believe how much pain your taking...
so you sit in your room all alone...
the place is quiet cuz there's no one home...

But you don't give up...and you stay strong...
and you force a laugh...and sing a song...
you hug your teddy bear...
and smile casue he's there...

You look out the window...
but still everythings gray...
you kneel to the ground and start to pray...
"Oh God, please help me get through the day..."

Then the door knob starts to turn...
and the inside of you burns...
and then the noises start to sound...
as you stand up from the ground...

and when the door is opened wide...
you start to jump around inside...
you see all your friends your family too...
now you know they still love you...

So again you look out the window...
and you see there's no more gray...
You kneel to the ground and you start pray...
"Oh God, thank you for getting me through this day..."
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Never give up! Just keep smiling! ^ ^ Yay!

Hey cool!! i'll give it a shot...im not very good though...

Home is Nowhere....

All around you all you see are unfarmiliar faces,
You've roamed more than a million places...
No where have you called home or family, they've never been there...
Your mind roams, yet your heart goes no where.

You've seen all corners of the world,
Spun around in circles, twirled and twirled...
You got dizzy and hit the ground,
You heard them around you, yet couldnt make a sound...

Left your head in the dirt, surrounded in sorrow...
And it pains you to know theres no tommorow..
You cant shut them out,
The sound in your head roams about...

Your tears are drowning you in execution..
and yet their faces hold no expression..
They dont seem to get the point, your dying,
They dont care and dont know, but your heart is bleeding, and you are crying

YOu may look strong, yet its not true,
Theyre not perfect but neither are you...
You took the gun, leaned againt the wall on your back..
ANd you saw them laugh...
Right before it all went black....

By: Miyuki Kazehana

yeah not my best but not my worst

Fallow me in this forsaken land, take my hand I'll protect you from the wicked man.
Stray from the golden path we will make a new. Stay close for we are few.
Fallow me on this new path, hold my hand i will protect you from there wicked plans.
they wish for ore death and to take all that we have.
Fallow me in this new land, we will take each others hand. and protect each other from the wicked man.
this path is broken and small but it will stay strong for the few rest that are left
they will fallow us, and take ore hands, we will protect them from the wicked men.
they will hear ore words of a new kingdom we will no longer be few and we will be strong so let the word spade that we will all start a new....