First chapter of this Naruto story that I made

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ok I really dont know what to do with this story that I made... should I just finish the story or what please just tell me what you think of it well I guess this is bye for now :bye:

The Sins We Bare ~Itachi/Sasuke Love Story~ Chapter 1


Itachi POV

What I’m about to tell you is something that I will never forget it was the day I found her and loved her. I saw something they night I killed my clan besides my younger brother that shouldn’t have happened but it did. The blood of my family moving towards something I couldn‘t believe it with my own two eyes that real blood was moving. I followed the blood to were it was going then I stop right there when I saw her rise from the ground covered with my family's blood all over her, she looked about Sasuke’s age, her eyes were still closed but when she opened them they were the most sea blue eyes that I have ever seen.
I was planning on killing her but she spoke to me.
“They forgive you”
As soon as those words came out of her mouth I stood at my spot, I didn’t know what to do or say.
So I asked who?
she said “your family they forgive you for what you had to do”.
I heard the anbu black ops coming, I didn’t believe what I was about to do but something told me to take her and don’t look back on it I took her with me and to this day I still don’t regret that choice I have made.
We ran as fast as we could and as far away from Konoha, my home and were I found this mystery girl.
We stopped after we reach Land of the River I ask her what her name was she looked up confused as ever and she even asked what a name is.
Are you stupid or something I said but I still saw that she was confused about it so I told her it’s what people call you.
I told her my name was Itachi she said my name wrong a few time ok it was a lot but she got it right and she looked up at me happy as a child would be on Christmas I smiled at her.
I told her I would give her a name and the name I gave her was Takare Uchiha.
Takare I gave her that name because on this day till fourth she will be my new treasure now that Saskue will never love or like me.
“Itachi why is your face red are you sick?”
She put her hand on my face she like she was so worried but all I could think of was how her skin was so soft and smooth.
“I’m fine Takare thank you for you concern and we need to get you some clothes you can’t go around naked.”
I handed her my shirt she looked so confused.
“Itachi what am I supposed to do with this?”
Oh great this was like taking care of a baby I put the shirt over Takare's head there its done the shirt was to big for her but it will do for now.
I asked Takare why she said that about my family.
“Itachi I don’t know a women told me to say it she had black hair there also was a man at her side they both look kind of happy and now that I think about you look like that woman too.
I was too shock to say anything.
Takare was talking about my mother and father and this was the every first time I have heard that I look like my mother.
Takare didn’t even notice my shocked face.
What Takare said next shock me even more.
“Itachi she told me to tell you that she was proud of you and that she was sorry that she couldn’t be there when you were younger and the man told me to say that he too was proud and sorry for how he treated you when you were a kid and wished that he could go back in time to change how the clan was and there both sorry for the burden that you will have to carry for the rest of you life and that’s about.”
When ever I looked at Takare she will remind me of my sins that I have committed.
Itachi can I ask you something?
Go ahead Takare.
Why was there blood all over me?
I didn’t know how to answer this question but I tried to the best I could and I told her everything that happened up to the point when I found her.
“Itachi I’m sorry for what you had to do is there anything I can do to help you.”
Takare just stay with me till the end please.
“Itachi I’ll be with you and plus you’re the only person I know.”