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Nami-Chan
Sophomore
Nami-Chan


Chinese Symbol : Rooster
Posts : 1921
Points : 1868
Join date : 2009-04-13
Age : 30
Location : In the dream worl with my brot

Character sheet
Strength :
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue39/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (39/1000)
Intelligence:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue37/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (37/1000)
HP:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue36/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (36/1000)

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PostSubject: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 24, 2009 8:37 am

You don't know me, but I know you.


I know what you like, and what you do.

You pass me everyday, on the dark and lonely street.

And though you are so close, I know we'll never meet.

Why does God insist, on keeping us apart?

How will our love end, if it never got to start?

How can I hold your hand, if you can't reach out to me?

How will we show our love, if their all to blind to see?

Only one question remains, carved on a golden plate...

I hang that plate upon my heart,
"Is love stronger than fate?"


^^ I know it's short, but it's catchy too! Thanks for reading! Love Nami-Chan.... :D
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Kim Ja-Yoon
Freshmen
Kim Ja-Yoon


Chinese Symbol : Rooster
Posts : 632
Points : 670
Join date : 2009-09-18
Age : 30

Character sheet
Strength :
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)
Intelligence:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)
HP:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)

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PostSubject: Re: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeSun Oct 25, 2009 10:54 pm

Woah... You totally and completely blew me away. O_o

I love this umm... poem? Well, I really love this piece of writing! ^^

And if you're happy with just those compliments, you can just take them and leave, or you can stick around to read WHY I like it. :D

Spoiler:

And if you'd like to see the suggestion....
Spoiler:
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Ayako
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Ayako


Chinese Symbol : Goat
Posts : 1364
Points : 1355
Join date : 2009-08-11
Age : 33

Character sheet
Strength :
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue26/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (26/1000)
Intelligence:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue26/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (26/1000)
HP:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue26/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (26/1000)

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PostSubject: Re: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 28, 2009 6:11 am

^^ I agree with Kimy-San, Nami-Chan! It is very very good! :D

Yes, you do have a few grammer/spelling mistakes. But as Kimy-San said, there aren't too many, and I don't really think they matter.
:D Your such a wonderful writer Nami-Chan.... TT ^ TT I wish I wash like youz!
-Huggles Nami and Kimy-
:D I lurves you guys! You ish my bestest fwends! {Randoooom. XD}
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PostSubject: Re: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 28, 2009 6:24 am

as Hiroko says "You rock Namida!"
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Nami-Chan
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Nami-Chan


Chinese Symbol : Rooster
Posts : 1921
Points : 1868
Join date : 2009-04-13
Age : 30
Location : In the dream worl with my brot

Character sheet
Strength :
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue39/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (39/1000)
Intelligence:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue37/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (37/1000)
HP:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue36/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (36/1000)

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PostSubject: Re: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 28, 2009 6:48 am

= D ThANKS GUYS!
I'm so glad you liked it!
^^

TT ^ TT Yeah sorry about the mistakes. I'm not very good with english...heh...
*bows*
Hope you can forgive meh
*ish huggled*
=D Guess that means you forgive meh! XD lol
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PostSubject: Re: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 28, 2009 5:16 pm

Nami-chan i can help you with spelling if you want and Hiroko is good at English
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Kim Ja-Yoon
Freshmen
Kim Ja-Yoon


Chinese Symbol : Rooster
Posts : 632
Points : 670
Join date : 2009-09-18
Age : 30

Character sheet
Strength :
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)
Intelligence:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)
HP:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)

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PostSubject: Re: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 1:45 am

Ayako wrote:
^^ I agree with Kimy-San, Nami-Chan! It is very very good! :D

Yes, you do have a few grammer/spelling mistakes. But as Kimy-San said, there aren't too many, and I don't really think they matter.
:D Your such a wonderful writer Nami-Chan.... TT ^ TT I wish I wash like youz!
-Huggles Nami and Kimy-
:D I lurves you guys! You ish my bestest fwends! {Randoooom. XD}

Rofl! Uhh... I love you, too! xDDD

And Kimy-san? No need to be so polite. Call me Jane, if you'd like. ^^
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Ayako
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Ayako


Chinese Symbol : Goat
Posts : 1364
Points : 1355
Join date : 2009-08-11
Age : 33

Character sheet
Strength :
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue26/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (26/1000)
Intelligence:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue26/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (26/1000)
HP:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue26/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (26/1000)

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PostSubject: Re: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 6:48 am

:D Jane!
-Huggles Jane-
^^ Jane. Thash pwetty!
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Kim Ja-Yoon
Freshmen
Kim Ja-Yoon


Chinese Symbol : Rooster
Posts : 632
Points : 670
Join date : 2009-09-18
Age : 30

Character sheet
Strength :
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)
Intelligence:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)
HP:
Love and fate. Left_bar_bleue40/1000Love and fate. Empty_bar_bleue  (40/1000)

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PostSubject: Re: Love and fate.   Love and fate. I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 31, 2009 5:07 pm

*is hugged* ^///^

Ohh... You really think so? It's such a common name... >.>

But... thanks for saying so. >///<
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