Raigen

Posts : 5 Points : 7 Join date : 2009-11-17

Hokkaido Academy
Let's go with Easy Go! To the unseen world...
Student Application

{{• The Principles
I can hear your voice that's slipping into the crowd
First Name: Raigen
Middle Name:
Last Name: Hayashi
Nickname(s): Lotus
Age: 16
Birthday: June 10th
Race:
Element:Lightning

{{• The Proficiency
I'm searching for the the map of the future in the center of the intersection
Special Ability: Super Jump

Explanation & Limits of Gift:
He has the ablity to be able to jump buildings eaily.He has great landing,and it sort of stings his body abit after he jumped a few times.He can have stinging affect.He sometimes won't be able to move his body at all.

Weapon:

Explanation of Weapon:

{{• The Presence
I believed in dreams always coming true on the other side of the sky!
Physical Looks:

Raigen is a very well done,well built guy for a adverage teenager.from top to bottom,he has beauitful long gray hair coming down to his chin.His eyes are very light blue.Which you can see anytime you look at him.He looks just like his Twin,Shinobu Hayashi.Nice Unpale skin.Normaly seen with a nice looking shirt,with very flexable pants.With maybe gym shoes on.He is not fat,nor super BUFF.no just buff,flexable guy.

{{• The Persona
What is there beyond the night? There are times filled with anxiety
General Attitude/Personality:
Guys:Raigen is completely staright,it never crossed his mind do be gay.But it depends,he acts very quiet around alot of people.But if they are cocky,he might say something in his mind or under his breath.But other then that he is the same quiet and don't say anything,if they say something to him he MIGHT make a smart comment to them.He knows how to fight very well so he doesn't mind fighting out of school.

Girls:Oh,how he loves girls.Around girls he is quiet.He watchs things.He knows the one he likes and watch her to see what she is up too.He is very romantic at times and love to be around them,at times he can be a pervert but other then that he is cool
Everyone else:Cool,calm and collected.

Goals:Redeption
Likes: Quiet,food his sword.
Dislikes: annoyance
Bad Habits: not speaking when not needed,speaking his mind when not needed.
Fears: Gaint stone swordmen
Other: The dudes pretty fast

{{• The Past
Even if it's impossible, if we don't do anything, it will stay zero
Parents: Died.
Siblings: Shinobu Hayashi
History: Raigen Hayashi,is the Twin brother of Shinobu Hayashi.The Hayashi Family was happy,they had secerts but they above all was a good family.Hayashi family had the ablity to do super jumps.But they never used it in public.And Raigen's parents were killed by a war.And Raigen and Shinobu somehow went in different ways.And Raigen finding a family somehow they signed him up for combat classes to keep him busy and not bored.And when summer ended he signed up for Hokkaido academy.

Who did you PM?: The girl that is not Sakurai.The one that name starts with a R.

Subject: Re: Raigen Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:57 pm

Uh oh! We seem to have a dilemma...

I. Your ability and weapon has little to no detail. We want disadvantages and advantages. Meaning, your disadvantages are basically things that could help your opponent and advantages obviously help you. Good solid paragraph for each, after that, we can determine if your weapon and ability is fair
II.Again, a good solid paragraph for your apperence and personality. They're important aspects so please don't be lazy and really put thought and detail into your application
III. Your history is the same, needs much more detail for it.
IV. It's Remilia thanks.

Posts : 5 Points : 7 Join date : 2009-11-17

fixed.

Subject: Re: Raigen Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:44 am

Uh oh! We seem to have another dilemma...

I. Your appearance, I'll accept but your personality again needs a good solid paragraph about yourself.
II. Your history still lacks detail for it. If you would like you can make your history private by sending it to either Sakurai or myself.]

Posts : 5 Points : 7 Join date : 2009-11-17

Edit.

Subject: Re: Raigen Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:14 pm

"Decent but effective ^_^."