Metzueda, Lilith

Subject: Metzueda, Lilith Sun Sep 27, 2009 2:16 am

Hokkaido Academy
Let's go with Easy Go! To the unseen world...
Student Application

{{• The Principles
I can hear your voice that's slipping into the crowd
First Name: Lilith
Middle Name: Sai
Last Name: Metzueda
Nickname(s): Lil Sai
Age: 16
Birthday: 14th of May
Race: Vampire
Element: Fire

{{• The Proficiency
I'm searching for the the map of the future in the center of the intersection
Special Ability: Telekinesis

Explanation & Limits of Gift: Lilith has the ability of telekinesis. The ability to move things with her mind. From the smallest paper clip to the biggest boulder. Only down side is she has to concentrate very hard and if that concentration is broken it could be bad for anyone is range of what she is moving.

Weapon: Bloody Dagger

Explanation of Weapon: Lilith weilds what is known as the Bloody Dagger. It appears to be a regular dagger but when blood touches it the dagger becomes a crimson red sword. Its a very powerful blade. Although to make sure the blade cant be stolen from her it is connected to her wrist by a strong thread. This is good and bad for her. Good is nobody can take it from her. Bad is with enough strength someone could easily pull the thread and cause it to cut her hand off.

{{• The Presence
I believed in dreams always coming true on the other side of the sky!
Physical Looks: Lilith is five foot four and is quite thin. She is strong but is sometimes scared by her own strength. She is fair skinned and very beautiful. Lilith has black eyes but the inner part is purple. She has a scar over her right eye. She has long flowing black hair. She is normally always seen with her Bloody Dagger. She wears the color black a lot and rarely anything else. She wears anything she feels comfortable in. She doesnt have a specific home. She travels and normally never stays in the same place too long. Her blood lust is one of her worst weaknesses.

{{• The Persona
What is there beyond the night? There are times filled with anxiety
General Attitude/Personality: Lilith is shy but friendly when she wishes to be. When alone she feels she doesnt have to hide anything. Being alone is the only time she feels safe to let down her gaurd and be herself. The only time she really loses control of herself is when she sees or smells blood.
Goals: She wishes to learn to control her bloodlust. She hopes to find out what happened to her parents.
Likes: Blood, pointy objects, and her dreams
Dislikes: being alone
Bad Habits: She has a bad habbit of attacking those close to her and ignoring people.
Fears: She fears hurting those around her and fire.
Other: Lilith never wants to get too close to anyone due to the fact that she is afraid of hurting them.

{{• The Past
Even if it's impossible, if we don't do anything, it will stay zero
Parents: Lilith doesnt know who her parents are. She was orphaned when she was a little girl. The only parents she has known were the village elders.
Siblings: Lilith has no brothers or sister. At least not that she knows of.
History: Lilith was living in a small town when she was little. When she turned ten the village was burned down by hunters. For some time she traveled around from village to village. Hiding, running, and trying to stay alive. She has burns on her arms from the fire in her home village. She has never known who her parents were. She has been alone her whole life. Lilith hopes that she will someday find out who and where her parents are. Lilith has no friends. She finds it easier not to become too close to someone. In the past she has had a bad habit of attacking those she cares about. Also for that reason she never stays in one place too long. Lilith has only one other goal and thats to control her bloodlust. She still wishes to find her parents but she has learned sometimes its easier to be around people. She found her way to Hokkaido Academy.

Who did you PM?: Sakurai

Subject: Re: Metzueda, Lilith Sun Sep 27, 2009 9:06 am

[Please don't have avatars/pictures/signatures that stretch the page >.<
it gets really annoying]

Subject: Re: Metzueda, Lilith Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:20 pm

oh sorry

Subject: Re: Metzueda, Lilith Mon Sep 28, 2009 3:32 pm

Where to begin... okay, so good detail overall.
Some things that need fixing before you can go out into Hokkaido and RP are the following:

For your element, please choose either fire or ice. Not both. If you read the instructions, this wouldn't be a problem.
Because your move is dependent on the first issue. I suggest you alter that also. And your flute's ability will have to be a stamina deduction move.
Please add more detail and extend the length of your character's past. That's... excuse me for this, pretty pathetic. I'm not asking for an essay but at LEAST two well-written paragraphs. We are a literate site, after all.

Subject: Re: Metzueda, Lilith Mon Sep 28, 2009 6:50 pm

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Subject: Re: Metzueda, Lilith Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:20 pm

thank you