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Maya Student Officer
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 7451 Points : 7443 Join date : 2009-04-13 Age : 32 Location : in a black coffin 6 feet under
Character sheet Strength : (73/1000) Intelligence: (70/1000) HP: (77/1000)
| Subject: Keya, Maya Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:07 pm | |
| Hokkaido AcademyLet's go with Easy Go! To the unseen world...Student Application{{• The PrinciplesI can hear your voice that's slipping into the crowdFirst Name:Maya Middle Name:Ai Last Name:keya Nickname(s):maya-chan Age: 16Birthday:11-06 Race:vampire Element: spirt {{• The ProficiencyI'm searching for the the map of the future in the center of the intersectionSpecial Ability: illusions
- Explanation & Limits of Gift: is able to make people see things that arent there to mess with that person(s) head can also cause pain though the illustions takes awhile to bulid up the strength
Weapon: kanta
- Explanation of Weapon: helps her control herself and her sprit very sharp can not be broke but is very small and the cuts can not be too deep but when used with two hands can cut deeper. the blade is blood red with a black hilt she calls her blade Amaya which means night rain because she loves the night and rain.
{{• The PresenceI believed in dreams always coming true on the other side of the sky!Physical Looks: she is 5' 4'' and doesnt look very strong (but is) with a skinny clear coplexion. her eyes change color with moods-which change often. her hair is a blueish whiteish color and goes down to her waist she has a scar on her stomach shaped like a star though she hides it from most people. she is white and very pale looking wears kimonos most of the time has a lip ring on her lower lip on the right side {{• The PersonaWhat is there beyond the night? There are times filled with anxietyGeneral Attitude/Personality: shes shy with most new people mostly happy with her friends when alone she darws or plays her gutair(sp?) or something like that she has another half named Kin Goals:to keep contol of kin (will be mentioned later) Likes:being happy being in love being with people she cares about Dislikes:heartbreaks Bad Habits:hurting herself being shy around people when she first meets them Fears:hunters and getting in trouble Other: {{• The PastEven if it's impossible, if we don't do anything, it will stay zeroParents:she cant remeber Siblings:cant remcenter](CHARACTER'S IMAGE GOES HERE.) {Don't stretch the page.} Hokkaido Academy Let's go with Easy Go! To the unseen world... Student Application
{{• The Presence I believed in dreams always coming true on the other side of the sky! Physical Looks: {I want height, build, body type, complexion, eye color, hair color, birthmarks, anything distinguishing, ethnicity, regular manner of clothing, piercings, etc. This will all make a very good paragraph if you get stuck.} {{• The Persona What is there beyond the night? There are times filled with anxiety General Attitude/Personality: {How do they interact with others? How do they act when they're alone? Do they have a split personality? All good ways to build your description.} Goals: Likes: {At least 3.} Dislikes: {At least 1.} Bad Habits: {At Least 2.} Fears: {At least two.} Other: {{• The Past Even if it's impossible, if we don't do anything, it will stay zero Parents: Siblings: History:Maya was a vampire in a family of humans (she has no human blood at all). She was blood related to them though she was born a vampire. Her vampiric skills and abilities however though remained dormant so she seemed human to others and her family, even herself. In the years of early teen, Maya was captured by a group of humans who claimed her as a vampire. Since she didn't know that she herself was one, she was scared and didn't know what was going on. When the hunters stopped to camp they had chained her up in the back. She was scared and wanted help. 'Someone, anyone please help me' she thought and a voice replied 'I can help'. Maya had looked around wondering what was going on. She knew she heard a voice but she didn't see anyone near her. 'I said I can help, but there's a price.' the voice said again. 'Please, please help me then. I'll do anything' she thought since the voice seemed to hear her when she thought. It sounded like the voice chuckled a bit before replying 'Thank you'. When Maya finally came to since things had gone black to her right after hearing the words: Thank you, she saw that the small group of hunters that had kidnapped her were dead. 'The deal is done, thank you for letting me live in your body. Perhaps well become friends.' The voice said, now sounding more inside her head. 'Who are you?' Maya asked the voice. 'Call me Kin' she said in return. After the incident with the hunters Maya learned that she was really a vampire like the hunters had been saying. She decided that instead of trying to find her family she should learn to control her abilities so she started to teach herself, occasionally Kin telling her how to do a few things. now she come to this school in hope for a new beginingkin still helping her around.
Who did you PM?:remilia
Last edited by Maya on Fri Sep 25, 2009 3:45 pm; edited 6 times in total | |
| | | Remilia Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 3911 Points : 2755 Join date : 2009-02-01 Age : 29 Location : 心臓
Character sheet Strength : (122/1000) Intelligence: (146/1000) HP: (162/1000)
| Subject: Re: Keya, Maya Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:19 pm | |
| - Personally, I think Magic is more on the Mage's side so can you pick something else? Also provide more detail like advantages and disadvantages
-Same with your weapon, everyone has a katana so what makes your different? advantages, disadvantages, What it looks like, etc.
- We don't really allow you to make a list of what she looks like, it's good but can you type it in full sentences and into a full paragraph?
-Please please add detail to your personality. Don't make it so narrow because the personality is what makes your character so please a full paragraph would be great!
- In your history you say you were born from Humans? Do you still have human blood or is it just vampire, if you have human blood, you would be a half-breed. | |
| | | Maya Student Officer
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 7451 Points : 7443 Join date : 2009-04-13 Age : 32 Location : in a black coffin 6 feet under
Character sheet Strength : (73/1000) Intelligence: (70/1000) HP: (77/1000)
| Subject: Re: Keya, Maya Mon Sep 21, 2009 2:57 pm | |
| hows that remilia-chan (hope you dont mind the chan part if you do tell me | |
| | | Remilia Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 3911 Points : 2755 Join date : 2009-02-01 Age : 29 Location : 心臓
Character sheet Strength : (122/1000) Intelligence: (146/1000) HP: (162/1000)
| Subject: Re: Keya, Maya Mon Sep 21, 2009 3:34 pm | |
| I don't mind ^_^ -However, your ability and weapon lack detail. Here's an example of good explanation for both - You're still using commas, listing what your character's personality is like and their appearance. - Also, heads up, I know you're an older member but please cease posting if you are, until this is accepted Please use this application as reference. Click: Sakurai Yakumo
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| | | Maya Student Officer
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 7451 Points : 7443 Join date : 2009-04-13 Age : 32 Location : in a black coffin 6 feet under
Character sheet Strength : (73/1000) Intelligence: (70/1000) HP: (77/1000)
| Subject: Re: Keya, Maya Fri Sep 25, 2009 3:45 pm | |
| ok if im missing anything this time please help me!!!! | |
| | | Remilia Admin
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 3911 Points : 2755 Join date : 2009-02-01 Age : 29 Location : 心臓
Character sheet Strength : (122/1000) Intelligence: (146/1000) HP: (162/1000)
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