Cloudz Is Loveless

{{• The Proficiency
I'm searching for the the map of the future in the center of the intersection
Special Ability:Teleportation {One or nothing.}

• Explanation & Limits of Gift: Cloudz instantly teleports to another location, however, the limit of his flicker is only twenty-five meters. The bad side to it is, if he were to continuously teleport, the exact location will be off.
  

Weapon: Twin Steel Blade {One or nothing.}

• Explanation of Weapon: Two, one meter long sword made out of pure steel. It curves like a cresent moon at the edge, with a hint of cyan on the sharp side. The handle is made of solid gold, and at the hilt is a blue rope, about five inches long, the rope is abit lossened from age.
  

{{• The Presence
I believed in dreams always coming true on the other side of the sky!Physical Looks: Cloudz is a six feet tall, asian pacific islander from Indonesia, Galang. He has bright cyan eyes that looks deep into your soul, his hair resembles the bright Sun exploding, his perfect muscular body tempts the most innocent girls. Has two round golden earings, wears an armor that fits all his curves, it also has a silver wolf embled on the right shoulder.
{I want height, build, body type, complexion, eye color, hair color, birthmarks, anything distinguishing, ethnicity, regular manner of clothing, piercings, etc. This will all make a very good paragraph if you get stuck.}

{{• The Persona
What is there beyond the night? There are times filled with anxiety
General Attitude/Personality: Quiet, lonely teen, he won't date. Not the type that will start a fight for no reason, but is the type that ends it.{How do they interact with others? How do they act when they're alone? Do they have a split personality? All good ways to build your description.}
Goals: Find 'The' Girl
Likes: The moon, its bright light, and its rival on the opposite side.{At least 3.}
Dislikes: Fire{At least 1.}
Bad Habits: Doesn't sleep, or Eat. {At Least 2.}
Fears: Himself and the man downstairs. {At least two.}
Other: ~~~

{{• The Past
Even if it's impossible, if we don't do anything, it will stay zero
Parents: Died hundreds of years ago.
Siblings: One perverted and Bipolar brother, who happens to be a werewolf.
History:Cloudz, or what ever his name was, was born in Galang, Indonesia. His mother died when she gave birth to him, his dad shunned him for the rest of his life, which wasn't long, considering he died a year after his wife. Cloudz then roamed the streets with his brother when they got into a fight, they split up. Cloudz ended meeting a nice girl about his age, then she turned out to be a vampire. He wasn't afraid, he told her to bite him, when she did, he turned into an angel that fell from heaven.{Be as descriptive as you can be. Where you were born, how your childhood was, etc.}

Who did you PM?:Remila

Very good!

Do you think you could put more detail in your weapon? Maybe 3 more sentences? We really like content ^^

For ability, maybe one for con and you're good to go n_n

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