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shybaby Freshmen
Chinese Symbol : Posts : 947 Points : 952 Join date : 2009-08-20 Age : 29 Location : Bedroom asleep ^^
Character sheet Strength : (31/1000) Intelligence: (31/1000) HP: (31/1000)
| Subject: Almieda, Christie Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:00 pm | |
| http://www.freewebs.com/myfurcadia/neko_witch.jpgHokkaido AcademyLet's go with Easy Go! To the unseen world...Student Application{{• The PrinciplesI can hear your voice that's slipping into the crowdFirst Name: christieMiddle Name: lauraLast Name: almiedaNickname(s): noneAge: 14Birthday: august 6Race: feline demonElement: fire {{• The ProficiencyI'm searching for the the map of the future in the center of the intersectionSpecial Ability: fire wall
- Explanation & Limits of Gift:
fire wall will protect the person using it but also will weakon them. it takes alot of ur energy to keep it up during a attack. it can help you by keeping the attackers at bay.
Weapon: throwing stars
- Explanation of Weapon:
throwing stars can be thrown in anyway n wil never miss its target. it is carved with swirls n is thin so u can keep a goood hold on it. you can also put it anywhere its small enough. you can also throw it at medium height it will still hit that spot on the knee.
{{• The PresenceI believed in dreams always coming true on the other side of the sky!Physical Looks: 5'6, lean, medium, light, gold, redish brown, birthmark on left hip, very loud, white, corset top wit black skirt n combat boots, tongue piercing {{• The PersonaWhat is there beyond the night? There are times filled with anxietyGeneral Attitude/Personality: very good with others. is very lonely when alone.has a splitt personality. she can also be very mean when push comes to shove. she loves having her way. hates it when she has to to things she dosent want to do. Goals: wants to be better at fightingLikes: people, animals, n readingDislikes: being mean to peopleBad Habits: can be abit loud and can fall asleep during classFears: losing someone and getting in troubleOther: none{{• The PastEven if it's impossible, if we don't do anything, it will stay zeroParents: deadSiblings: deadHistory: was born in colorado. when she turned 11 her parents n sister were killed in a car acciendent. she was at home with her grandmother. she lived with her for a year and then left. at age 12 she started fights all the time n wouldnt stop. at age 13 she finally stoped n straightend up. she is now 14 n is trying to start over witheverything. she thinks it her fault that her famly died that day. because she called n told them to hurry home. when she wa living with her grandmother wierd things were happining she was setting things on fire. when her grandmother fond out she locked her in cages. so one day she ranaway.Who did you PM?: remilla
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Chinese Symbol : Posts : 3911 Points : 2755 Join date : 2009-02-01 Age : 29 Location : 心臓
Character sheet Strength : (122/1000) Intelligence: (146/1000) HP: (162/1000)
| Subject: Re: Almieda, Christie Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:10 pm | |
| I'm not exactly sure what is this. My suggestion read the role-playing guide | |
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Chinese Symbol : Posts : 3911 Points : 2755 Join date : 2009-02-01 Age : 29 Location : 心臓
Character sheet Strength : (122/1000) Intelligence: (146/1000) HP: (162/1000)
| Subject: Re: Almieda, Christie Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:21 am | |
| Okay, I'll try to be as nice as possible for this APP
Special Ability: Put more detail into your ability. You can put it's weaknesses and strengths. But at least 3-4 more sentences there.
Weapon: Never missing is considered godmodding and unfair to other players. Also, you could describe what these stars look like, what sort of techniques they hold. Advantages and disadvantages, anything that will give a good description of what is it. 3-4 more sentences.
Appearance: Complete sentences is appreciated. Your description is rather small and not that descriptive. Please don't use commas to describe everything.
Personality: Same thing, it's lacking a lot of detail. I'm pretty sure your character can be more than "Nice". You can describe actions that your character does that makes her unique. As for split-personality, it doesn't really describe anything.
History: For History, we want A LOT of detail, Your childhood, your hardships, your parents if you remembered them in the past. We want to know a lot of detail for this. The minimum is 5-6 sentences.
Note that you can't RPG until this is done if you read everything correctly. | |
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Chinese Symbol : Posts : 3911 Points : 2755 Join date : 2009-02-01 Age : 29 Location : 心臓
Character sheet Strength : (122/1000) Intelligence: (146/1000) HP: (162/1000)
| Subject: Re: Almieda, Christie Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:54 am | |
| It lacks a lot of detail but despite that, please please TRY to put as much detail in history. | |
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Chinese Symbol : Posts : 3911 Points : 2755 Join date : 2009-02-01 Age : 29 Location : 心臓
Character sheet Strength : (122/1000) Intelligence: (146/1000) HP: (162/1000)
| Subject: Re: Almieda, Christie Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:58 am | |
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